Website
- Website suited audience and users targeted - with vibrancy, suitable fonts chosen and use of CS5
- Navigation was intuitive and the tabs on some pages were seen as a good idea
- Text on information pages needed to be broken up a bit more - this could be seen on the homepage with the "History" subheading being written in the carnival font
- Drop the point size of the information text slightly - could be seen as a bit too big
- Assess the overall size of the website on Dreamweaver
- The continuity of curved and sharp edged boxes is too varied. Needs to be one or the other throughout generally.
- Add a bit more 'grunge' to the site. Perhaps make it more like a carnival/circus, to make it more fun and interesting. This should only be done slightly, as it needs to still attract the same users - especially for its corporate side. Ideas included making the signs/buttons into wooden boxes etc.
- The other background seemed more interesting with the flower in focus. It may be an idea to use this for the site and see how it would work.
PDF
- Presented clearly and simply
- The way I showed the progression from initial ideas, through to the final site was liked.
- Research into other sites was included
- Needed to organise the text and align it better - shouldn't be centered.
